Dear Vicente, This is the link with some comments. Your analysis if very complete.A brief summary of each piece of news is necessary after the introduction. Now is time to discover your own writing style. Sometimes, the density of information in your texts is too high, therefore, it is difficult as a reader to engage with your message. 7! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XHouQ4VrETvp_qjJkvGDqbb0JqLoED0MMpkOp0Gn0kA/edit
Dear Vicente,
ReplyDeleteThis is the link with some comments. Your analysis if very complete.A brief summary of each piece of news is necessary after the introduction. Now is time to discover your own writing style. Sometimes, the density of information in your texts is too high, therefore, it is difficult as a reader to engage with your message.
7!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XHouQ4VrETvp_qjJkvGDqbb0JqLoED0MMpkOp0Gn0kA/edit
Thank you, miss. I think that we should work on my style too, it is extremely plain and overwhelming.
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